Tainted [poem]

so-ho....Raito told me to post a story and poem. So here's a poem, sorry its one of my older ones. I don't make poems much....

The dancing moonlight, stars abri

To taste the dawn break, soft, subside

The woman in the corner, the smells of sweat and cheap perfume

Don't tread on thin ice, thats where the creatures loom



It'll lure you in the moonlight, its fake features aglow

Its tender, swift movements, its feel and its flow

The piercing blue eyes with frozen reflections of skies

Its full deep-stained lips that spin beautiful lies



Pale skin of it youth that will never fade of wither

Black free-flowing hair, with its waves and its slither

She hides in the silence of winter, waiting, secluded

Preys off your sadness, now pureness deluted

Very interesting! I like the way it is written.