~Anbu Crimson Flare~ Admin
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| Subject: .E.C.O. (Elemental.Creature.Organization) Sat 25 Jul - 16:38 | |
| I thought of this story a long time ago when I was in Fifth Grade. And it's still going to now, but I haven't made a story yet from the beginning. Ane here it is. Please Enjoy reading this FanFic of Mine.
Preface
In a distant world, far, far away from earth, is a peculiar world for animals of different species. They call themselves ‘Creatures’ and ‘Spirits. ‘Creature Spirits’ are a very rare species in this particular world. We call this world the ‘Creature World’, full of Spirits of good, purity, and peace. There is one particular Creature that is all powerful, protective, and a leader. But this is no Creature, it’s a human. A human with the power to control a Creature to tame it from it’s tainted ways. This person is named ‘Master’ to the Creatures, but she is known as the ‘Master of the Creature World’. The Master is acknowledged by many Creatures in the world for her greatness, kindness, trustworthiness, and protection. But on the other side of the Creature World lies an unimaginable force of Dark Aura lurking. These are special kinds of Creatures with Darkness in their Spirit. These Creatures are called Shadow Creatures. They are controlled by a Shadow name DarknessShade. A devious Shadow that is named the ‘Shadow of Darkness’. With it’s right-hand man, well…right-hand woman, Empress, they unleashed a full force war to take over the creature world. Everything in the Creature World is in turmoil from all of the Shadows. But the Master will never run and hide. The Master challenges DarknessShade to a battle-of-death to decide the fate of the Creature world. But Empress took on the Master. The battle lasted for days on end between the Master and Empress. But as the Master’s Spirit Aura was about to fade away, the Creature’s offered their Spirit and made the Master’s final move; The Ultimate Power. The Master used her final move, along with her remaining Aura, to dispose of Empress, but sacrificed herself in order for all the Shadows to disappear. The Master’s Spirit went inside the Ultimate Power, for another person to take it’s place. The power lurked around through a portal to another world that is very peculiar to her. And that particular world she came into… Is Earth | |
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Saya Otonashi Admin
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| Subject: Re: .E.C.O. (Elemental.Creature.Organization) Sat 25 Jul - 19:55 | |
| Very interesting! I like it a lot! | |
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~Anbu Crimson Flare~ Admin
Posts : 419 Age : 30 Location : Somewhere in the closet...with nachoes.
| Subject: Re: .E.C.O. (Elemental.Creature.Organization) Sat 25 Jul - 20:14 | |
| Why thank you. I'm glad you liked it. I've drawn the characters of this. I wish I can find the cord to the digital camera so I can take pictures of them and post them in here. ^_^ | |
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Genten Global Moderator
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| Subject: Re: .E.C.O. (Elemental.Creature.Organization) Sun 26 Jul - 5:12 | |
| I like it. Have you considered continuing it? | |
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~Anbu Crimson Flare~ Admin
Posts : 419 Age : 30 Location : Somewhere in the closet...with nachoes.
| Subject: Re: .E.C.O. (Elemental.Creature.Organization) Sun 26 Jul - 5:27 | |
| I will continue on it. But on school days, I will be on only on Saturdays. ^_^''' | |
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selfdestruction VIP
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| Subject: Re: .E.C.O. (Elemental.Creature.Organization) Sun 26 Jul - 17:32 | |
| nice espacially that the master is a "she" | |
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~Anbu Crimson Flare~ Admin
Posts : 419 Age : 30 Location : Somewhere in the closet...with nachoes.
| Subject: Re: .E.C.O. (Elemental.Creature.Organization) Mon 27 Jul - 15:54 | |
| Yes, the Master is a she. I'm trying to make the story very interesting and good. ^_^ I'm glad all of you like it. | |
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Saya Otonashi Admin
Posts : 3519 Age : 28 Location : Greece
| Subject: Re: .E.C.O. (Elemental.Creature.Organization) Mon 27 Jul - 18:30 | |
| It is very nice, really! Don't forget to cotninue it | |
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~Anbu Crimson Flare~ Admin
Posts : 419 Age : 30 Location : Somewhere in the closet...with nachoes.
| Subject: Re: .E.C.O. (Elemental.Creature.Organization) Tue 28 Jul - 20:04 | |
| I will once I think of Chapter one. ^_^ | |
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Saya Otonashi Admin
Posts : 3519 Age : 28 Location : Greece
| Subject: Re: .E.C.O. (Elemental.Creature.Organization) Wed 29 Jul - 16:51 | |
| OK I cannot wait to read it | |
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Serenity  
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| Subject: Re: .E.C.O. (Elemental.Creature.Organization) Sat 1 Aug - 13:07 | |
| It's great! I am looking forward to reading the sequence! | |
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Saya Otonashi Admin
Posts : 3519 Age : 28 Location : Greece
| Subject: Re: .E.C.O. (Elemental.Creature.Organization) Sat 1 Aug - 15:57 | |
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